Thursday, January 17, 2013

Hi!! Today I'm going to write a response essay after watching a movie called 'Brave'. I thought the movie was touching. It's about 500 words! Hope you enjoy reading this!!

                                                Response Essay

. We all have different hobbies and things that we are good at. When Merida and her mother had an argument, I thought of the sister who lives upstairs in the apartment I live. But it turned out you can always fix the problem by talking to each other. If you talk, you can find your faults. That's why my mom and I have a good relationship. Just listening can solve anything. That is why I think teachers tell you to listen carefully to many things.
 
 Also when Merida's mother turned into a bear, I felt that Merida should have never made the wish in the first place. Both me and Merida were really worried. 'How would she change her mother ba
I saw a movie called 'Brave'. It was about a girl named Merida. She wanted her fate to change. So she turns her mother into a bear and she tried to change her back. When I saw the movie it was really touching. Merida learned she loved her mother even tough they fought sometimes. That is the main reason I enjoyed the movie.

Merida and her mother didn't have a good relationship. Her mother didn't like Merida shooting arrows. But I don't think that's badck?' It turned out that the spell would be permanent after the second sunrise. That is why I got more nervous. I felt like a was in the movie. However Merida got to know that by sewing the tapestry back together it would change her mother.  At first it didn't work so I was confused. Why didn't her mother change back when Merida was done sewing it? I think it worked when Merida had the courage to admit she made a mistake.

 Since Merida's mom always scolded Merida that is why she wanted her fate to change. That was sort of  her mom's fault. But after her mom changed into a person again, she got to know that she didn't want any changes in her life. She liked everything the way it was. Sometimes I don't like some things in my life. After seeing this movie, I changed my mind. Even tough I'm not satisfied I would not want anything to change. If my mom turned intoa bear, I would have tried as hard as Merida to change her back. Now I feel really sorry for the wrong things I did.
 
 This movie taught me a lot of things. I learned that I don't want anything to change and that my family loves me. I wish Merida and her family will live happily from now on. They could get into a fight but having a good relationship. My roommate got intoa fight yesterday. Thankfully they apologied to each other. I am sure that they thought they have liked each other for a friend.

Thank you!!!! Was it interesting or boring???

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jiyoon,

    Your essay is interesting but it is also a little confusing. you need to clearly explain what you are refering to in the movie. Start with a brief summary of the movie after your introduction so the reader knows what happens. It is also a good idea to add a video clip of the movie to your post.

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